2014년 10월 26일 일요일

My first Draft


Recently, for the age of information, lots of robots are creating which has abilities of working instead of humans and helping human to be convenient. Even robots which read fairy tale to children are creating and they are popular,especially to couples working together for a living, and rate of sales of them is growing increasingly. Therefore I think why people educate children to read and Is reading education suitable for development of children? And I thought influences of reading educations in many aspect ;  in emotion, in linguistic, in social & government


Most people already know the fact that reading education is important and it exert strong influence, but they don't  interest in this and Korea does not proceed this education systematically.



First, children are immature and they lack of experience yet, so they can have a lots of experience to grow emotional by reading. They can  have creativity and be imaginative by reading books of various fields at second hand. Also, they can learn emotions such as joy and sorrow and control their emotions through the behavior and lines the main character of the book. Actually researcher found that many children would learn self-esteem, manners, modesty honesty. Their direct experiences are limited, so reading education which develop children's abilities in emotion is important.

Second, When we are young, most of us might be told stories which mother or father or grandmother read us. According to studies, their native languages which is used by reading can affect their learning of language. Actually children who were told stories by parents or grandparents are learned native language easily than the other children who did not that experience.
In addition, students who read many books are good at understanding the individual sentences and the organizational structure of a piece of writing. And also they are more likely to do well in school and pass exams than a student who are weak readers. If you want your child to be successful at school, encourage him or her to read. Therefore reading education is important and has significant influence to development of children in linguistic. 

Finally, There are many clubs which children or students can express their opinions and communicate with other people and then their social abilities can be enhanced. And also there are many cases that people who read many books or educated to read many books can be inventors or politicians, innovators. For example Edison and Bill Gates read many books when they were young told wise sayings about reading. People like Bill Gates are succeed with collaboration intellectual curiosity and reading. And other people who are like Edison are overcome situations which are in danger or despair. Because these people existed, society or government can be developed.


Of course, there are people who think that is reading education necessary? or Can reading be educated to children. But I think that from at that time of children, reading education is organized systematically. By doing that, habit of reading can be resisted.



There are reasons why reading education is suitable for development of children. 
Firstly, children can have a lots of experience to grow emotional by reading and learn control their emotions, self-esteem, manners, modesty honesty. Their direct experiences are limited, so reading education which develop children's abilities in emotion is important.
In addition, children who were told stories by parents or grandparents are learned native language easily than the other children who did not that experience, so reading education is important and has significant influence to development of children in linguistic. 
Finally, There are many clubs which children or students can express their opinions and communicate with other people and then their social abilities can be enhanced. And also there are many cases that people who read many books or educated to read many books can be inventors or politicians, innovators. 
Above these reasons I think reading education is suitable for development of children. Recently rates of children's reading are decreasing and they do not once or twice a month. so I think parents and society should encourage for children to read. 

week10_Conclusion

Conclusion 

Instructions:
  1. Read the conclusion instructions here.
  2. Write your conclusion and all the drafts like this example. 
  3. Don’t delete the old conclusions! Keep a record of them so I and your peers can see your progress.

My Conclusion 


There are reasons why reading education is suitable for development of children. And also 

Firstly, children can have a lots of experience to grow emotional by reading and learn control their emotions, self-esteem, manners, modesty honesty. Their direct experiences are limited, so reading education which develop children's abilities in emotion is important.
In addition, children who were told stories by parents or grandparents are learned native language easily than the other children who did not that experience, so reading education is important and has significant influence to development of children in linguistic. 
Finally, There are many clubs which children or students can express their opinions and communicate with other people and then their social abilities can be enhanced. And also there are many cases that people who read many books or educated to read many books can be inventors or politicians, innovators. 
Above these reasons I think reading education is suitable for development of children. Recently rates of children's reading are decreasing and they do not once or twice a month. so I think parents and society should encourage for children to read. 

Research3_reading & reading education of the twenty-first century

Research: 10/26 reading & reading education of the twenty-first century

Source: http://www.korean.go.kr/nkview/nklife/2012_4/22_0403.pdf


My Topic:
reading education is suitable for development of children.


What I hope to learn from this source:

the current reading is applied information age and suitable reading education of future is reading out of school curriculum. And reading is influence social ability of children.


Notes :

1.지역 사회나 특정한 목적을 가진 사람들의 모임, 현실 공간 밖에 존재하는 사이버 공간에서의 지식 정보의 산출과 소통이 이 시대의 중요한 문식 활동으로 자리매김되었다.
→There are many clubs which students can communicate with other people and they are enhanced social abilities.

  
2. 다양한 분야의 글을 폭넓게 읽고 그 내용을 효과적으로 이해하는 능력
→ Children can have abilities to understand efficiently the contents by reading books of various fields 


Final Thoughts:
reading education can develop social ability of children.

Research2_Reading_education_in_the_United_States

Research: 

10/26 Reading_education_in_the_United_States

Source:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reading_education_in_the_United_States

My Topic:
reading education is suitable for development of children.


What I hope to learn from this source:
I want to find that definition of reading education in U.S.A and Instructional methods and history.


Notes:
  1. Reading education is the process by which individuals are taught to derive meaning from text.
  2.  that teaching children to manipulate phonemes in words was highly effective under a variety of teaching conditions with a variety of learners across a range of grade and age levels and that teaching phonemic awareness to children significantly improves their reading more than instruction that lacks any attention to PA.
  3. Students in this method memorize the appearance of words, or learn to recognize words by looking at the first and last letter from rigidly selected vocabularies in progressive texts (such as The Cat in the Hat).

Final Thoughts:
Through reading education in U.S.A, our country develop the education and encourage children to be educated that they can be more familiar with many books.

week9_Refutation and Concession

Refutation and Concession 


Instructions:

1. Answer the following questions.
2. Write your own refutation and concession.

1. What is my thesis?
reading education is suitable for development of children.

2. What is the opposite position?
Is it necessary to be educated reading?

3. What arguments can I anticipate?
There are even children who read lots of books without education.

4. How will I counter those arguments?
It is impossible to like reading or be able to read in nature.
There are many environments or parents' tendency and so on.


My Refutation and Concession
Of course, there are people who think that is reading education necessary? or Can reading be educated to children. But I think that from at that time of children, reading education is organized systematically. By doing that, habit of reading can be resisted.

week8_Confirmation

Confirmation

Instructions:
1. Answer the following questions.
2. Write your confirmation.

1. What is my thesis?
reading education is suitable for development of children.

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using other country' case and expert's opinion and article.

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments are logic, because I compare the difference between Korea and U.S,A, and I also quote the  expert's opinion and article which are based on experiments.


My Confirmation


Reading education is suitable for development of children. And it can be divided in emotion, in linguistic, in social & government.

First, children are immature and they lack of experience yet, so they can have a lots of experience to grow emotional by reading. They can  have creativity and be imaginative by reading books of various fields at second hand. Also, they can learn emotions such as joy and sorrow and control their emotions through the behavior and lines the main character of the book. Actually researcher found that many children would learn self-esteem, manners, modesty honesty. Their direct experiences are limited, so reading education which develop children's abilities in emotion is important.

Second, When we are young, most of us might be told stories which mother or father or grandmother read us. According to studies, their native languages which is used by reading can affect their learning of language. Actually children who were told stories by parents or grandparents are learned native language easily than the other children who did not that experience.
In addition, students who read many books are good at understanding the individual sentences and the organizational structure of a piece of writing. And also they are more likely to do well in school and pass exams than a student who are weak readers. If you want your child to be successful at school, encourage him or her to read. Therefore reading education is important and has significant influence to development of children in linguistic. 

Finally, There are many clubs which children or students can express their opinions and communicate with other people and then their social abilities can be enhanced. And also there are many cases that people who read many books or educated to read many books can be inventors or politicians, innovators. For example Edison and Bill Gates read many books when they were young told wise sayings about reading. People like Bill Gates are succeed with collaboration intellectual curiosity and reading. And other people who are like Edison are overcome situations which are in danger or despair. Because these people existed, society or government can be developed.

week6 _ introduction

Introduction

 Recently, for the age of information, lots of robots are creating which has abilities of working instead of humans and helping human to be convenient. Even robots which read fairy tale to children are creating and they are popular,especially to couples working together for a living, and rate of sales of them is growing increasingly. Therefore I think why people educate children to read and Is reading education suitable for development of children? And I thought influences of reading educations in many aspect ;  in emotion, in linguistic, in social & government


 1. Attention grabber

 I attracted the audience by describing cases that people who is educated reading education, so reading educations make them creativity and unbiased and so on.


 2. Explains the topic

 In the attention grabber I introduce all the elements of my topic: reading education, influences to children (in emotion, in linguistic, in social & government)

 3. My thesis

 It is clear, direct and an argument. I thought the argument "reading education suitable for development of children" was too simple and nobody would dispute it.

Research1_The importance of reading

Research : 10/26

The importance of reading

Source:
http://esl.fis.edu/parents/advice/read.htm

My Topic:
reading education is suitable for development of children.


What I hope to learn from this source:
reading education is important in many aspects


Notes:
  1. a student who is a good reader is more likely to do well in school and pass exams than a student who is a weak reader.
  2. Good readers can understand the individual sentences and the organizational structure of a piece of writing.
  3. Educational researchers have also found a strong correlation between reading and vocabulary knowledge. In other words, students who have a large vocabulary are usually good readers. 
  4. ☆if you want your child to be successful at school encourage him or her to read.
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Final Thoughts:

I thought that relationship between reading and vocabulary can not divided.
Reading education makes children have abundant vocabulary and their notable vocabulary enriches children's lives 


2014년 10월 25일 토요일

week7_ Narration

Instructions:
1. Write your thesis.
2. Answer questions 1, 2 and 3.
3. Write your Narration.

My persuasive argument thesis is: \
reading education is suitable for development of children.

1. What do people already know about my topic?

Everyone knows that reading educations are extremely influence to children. But they don't know about the influence of reading educations definitely.



2. What research has already been done about my topic?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reading_education_in_the_United_States - definition of reading education
http://www.education.com/reference/article/important-reading-motivation-comprehension/ - importance of reading education
http://www.bu.edu/sed/academics/graduate/edm/reading/ - the case of enforcement of reading education
http://www.education.pitt.edu/AcademicDepartments/InstructionLearning/Programs/ReadingEducation.aspx  - effect of reading education


3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

Through my arguments, I instruct how important reading education to children and I insist that the educations policies can be promoted and made children  interest in reading, read many books and realize the enjoyment of reading.
Most people know that reading education is important and it has many advantages to children' grow, but they do not carry into execution


My Narration

 Recently, for the age of information, lots of robots are creating which has abilities of human. Even robots which read fairy tale to children are creating and they are popular,especially couples working together for a living, and rates of sales are growing. Therefore I think why people educate children to read and Is reading education suitable for development of children?
Most people already know the fact that reading education is important and it exert strong influence, but they don't  interest in this and Korea does not proceed this education systematically.


2014년 10월 13일 월요일

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