My second draft

Recently, for the age of information, lots of robots are creating which has abilities of working instead of humans and helping human to be convenient. Even robots that read fairy tale to children are creating and they are popular, especially to couples working together for a living, and rate of sales of them is growing increasingly. Why the bots are popular and have abilities to read to children? Is the reading education so important? Most people may already think that reading education is important and it exert a strong influence, but they don't interest in this greatly and Korea does not proceed this education
 systematically but it just conventional to development of children. Therefore I think why people educate children to read and Is reading education suitable for development of children? And I thought influences of reading educations in three aspects ;  in emotion, in linguistic, in social & government.

First of all, children are immature and they lack of experience yet, so they can have the lots of experience to grow emotional by reading. They can have creativity and be imaginative by reading books of various fields at second hand. Also, they can learn emotions such as joy and sorrow and control their emotions through the behavior and lines the main character of the book. Actually a researcher found that many children would learn self-esteem, manners, modesty honesty. Therefore reading education that develop children's abilities in emotion is important because their direct experiences are limited.

Second, When we are young, most of us might be told stories that mother or father or grandmother read us. According to studies, their native languages which are used by reading can affect their learning of language. Actually Children who were told stories by parents or grandparents are learned native language easily than the other children who did not that experience.
In addition, students who read many books are good at understanding the individual sentences and the organizational structure of a piece of writing. And also they are more likely to do well in school and pass exams than a student who are weak readers. If you want your child to be successful at school, encourage him or her to read. Therefore reading education is important and has significant influence to development of children in linguistic. 

Finally, There are many clubs that children or students can express their opinions and communicate with other people and then their social abilities can be enhanced. And also there are many cases that people who read many books or educated to read many books can be inventors or politicians, innovators. For example Edison and Bill Gates read many books when they were young told wise sayings about reading. People like Bill Gates are succeeded with collaboration intellectual curiosity and reading. And other people who are like Edison are overcome situations that are in danger or despair. Because these people existed, society or government can be developed.

Of course, there are people who think that is reading education necessary? Or Can reading be educated to children? But I think that from at that time of children, reading education is organized systematically. By doing it, habit of reading can be resisted. And also there are people not only parents and teachers but also specialist of reading of children. They will lead them to right way with books. And there are also book master who recommend the books which are good books and fits readers' age.

There are reasons why reading education is suitable for development of children. 
Firstly, children can have the lots of experience to grow emotional by reading and learn control their emotions, self-esteem, manners, modesty honesty. Their direct experiences are limited, so reading education that develop children's abilities in emotion is important.

In addition, children who were told stories by parents or grandparents are learned native language easily than the other children who did not that experience. Therefore reading education is important and has significant influence to development of children in linguistic. 

Finally, There are many clubs that children or students can express their opinions and communicate with other people and then their social abilities can be enhanced. And also there are many cases that people who read many books or educated to read many books can be inventors or politicians, innovators. 

Above these reasons I think reading education is suitable for development of children. Recently rates of children's reading are decreasing, and they do not once or twice a month. So I think, parents and society should encourage for children to read.