Peer Review_20220 jeongjiye

Peer Review 

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Grade

According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?

4점, 주제가 참신하고 구조적으로 잘 되어있었다.

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
중간중간 문장만 정리하면 될 것 같다.

Thesis

What is the thesis?

whether creativity is an ability that can be taught

Is the thesis clear and debatable?

 Yes

If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
like writer

Any other thoughts?

no

Classical Argument

Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
Yes

Does the introduction catch your attention?Yes
Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? Yes

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?

Yes

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?

Yes

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Yes
Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner? Yes

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 

Yes

What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?

Yes

Persuasion

When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 

agree

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?

agree

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?

no

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?

Research

Is the author using research effectively? 

Yes

Is the research from appropriate sources?

Yes, 

Are the sources obvious?

Yes, 

Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?

Yes

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?

no